寫．得盡

這個週末，英文的其中一份功課是要我們作文，題目是﹕「A Science-fiction About Egyptian pyramids」。我們學會了『Cliffhanger』，即是作文寫到最高潮的時候就停了，沒有結局的，或那段是吸引人去看續集的就是『Cliffhanger』的意思。

本篇文章不少於 200 字，大家不愛英文的話，不看就是了，不用勉強。

我寫的文章一定會有錯，別怪嘛，看了就算，別當它作一回事！;) 

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Long long time ago, there were two men called Edmond and Moses. They went to Egypt for a long holiday. 

After they arrived at the hotel, Moses had an idea and he told Edmond, 'I want to visit a pyramid. It will be exciting! Will you come with me?' Edmond shocked, 'What?! Go to pyramid? Is that ture? I would say: Yes!' And Moses said, 'Then I'll go to book a transport to go there.'

The next day, two men travelled a bus to go to the largest pyramid in the world. There were nobody because it just mid-night. The sky was black and it was turning to yellow. Edmond felt his heart beating vigorously. He didn't want to go into the pyramid. 'Hey, don't be scared. It will be a perfect journey!' Moses comforted him and gave him a smile. 

They went into the pyramid and the flash light was on. Moses looked at the pictures on the wall. 'They are all delicate! Look here.' Moses said surprised and pointed to the wall. 'Are we going to...... going to inside?' Asked Edmond in a frightened voice. 'Of course! Otherwise, why would we have come here?' Moses answered. 

Edmond was so frightened. He dared not to lift up his head. So, he put his head down. But he saw some little things were flying. Small like ants and they were white. Edmond said to Moses, 'Moses, come here! Something are flying! Do you know what are they?' Nobody answered him. Edmond felt a little bit strange. He looked up, and...... 'Moses! Where are you?' 

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* 橙色的那個字，我曾寫錯了『Edmond』！可想而知我寫的時候是如此緊張……~﹏~"